Bad Insident Happen In The Pool
Last weel,an accident happend at the pool.The insident involve a boy who is 10-12 years old while trying to swim.Thr incident happened when I was relaxing by the pool at a beach resort.Suddennly,I was herad a scream. after that,I saw a boy was srtuggling in the pool.
Many people were saw the incident but no wanted include me going to safe the boy.Then,a lifeguard come to safe the boy as fast as lightning.The lifeguard pulled out the boy from the pool and give a CPR.Then,the boy's family came to see the boy condition.In the minutes,an amnulance came with a full styke to bring the boy to hospital for check his condotion.
The incident give a lesson to us about how important safety in our daily life and important of prevent the incident happen again.There are many ways to prevent the incident from happen again.For example,parents should always saw their child and make them are safe.
There numerous errors in this post. Spelling errors, grammatical errors are almost everywhere. Did you read your own post? Please edit this.
ReplyDelete"Suddenly, I was herad a scream..." supposed to be written "Suddenly, I heard a scream..". "was" is not suppose to be there.
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